Watch this video before-hand. You can activate its subtitles:
If you're feeling uninspired, here is an example:
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To: nicolas.cage@vanadys.com
From: meryl.streep@vanadys.com
Subject: Meeting About New Internet Service Provider 1/8/2013
Dear Mr. Cage,
I have been researching our choices for internet providers over the past week, and I wanted to update you on my progress. We have two options: H.C. Cable and Toll South. Both offer business plans, and both have comparable speed and data usage offerings as well. I called your personal provider, GoGo Satellite, but they did not have any business offerings. They primarily do residential internet service.
Would it be possible for us to meet up to discuss the best option? If you have any questions, please let me know.
Respectfully,
Meryl Streep
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Comment a short formal email and we'll correct them next day in class.
Here is my exercise:
ReplyDeleteTo: adolfo.pinan@vanadys.com
From: uriel.miralles@vanadys.com
Subject: APO bank project starting
Dear Mr. Piñan,
I am writing this email to inform you about the start of the APO Bank Project. We are now in the analysis and design step, waiting for the contracts, but I cannot longer work full time on Isbank maintenance starting this week. We must discuss the conditions of the reporting for both clients.
Thank you and best regards,
Uriel
My exercise:
ReplyDeleteTo: adolfo.pinan@vanadys.com
From: ruth.gonzalez@vanadys.com
Subject: Visit to doctor on Wednesday
Dear Mr. Piñan,
Wednesday I need arrive later at the office, because I have a visit to the doctor in the hospital Vall d'Hebró at 9:40 a.m.
Tuesday night and Wednesday night, I will recover the hours not worked.
Thank you.
Regards,
Ruth Gonzàlez
ReplyDeleteHi, this is my exercise:
To: adolfo.pinan@vanadys.com
From: jordi.garcia@vanadys.com
Subject: A new coffe machine is required.
Dear Mr. Piñan,
I'm writing you to inform about the urgent necessity to buy a new coffee machine.
The productivity of the company is being affected due to this reason.
I think that the current one is not working well, yesterday I saw some of our collegues sleepy in their desks.
I hope you consider my proposal.
Kind regards,
Jordi Garcia
to: admin@vanadys.com
ReplyDeletefrom: nico@vanadys.com
Subject: Admin documents
Dear Mrs. Admin,
As requested on your previous email, please find attached the following documents:
- ID document
- Judicial Record
I look forward to your reply in case you'd need aditional information or some
other documents.
Kind regards,
Nicolas.